Rabu, 05 November 2014

MY HERO



“MY HERO”
What’s up guys?? Do you have a hero in your life? I think everyone has a hero in their life.
Here, I will tell you about my hero in my life. He is my father. He is 45 years old. Still young right ? His birthday is on 21st January. He has thin and tall body. He has mustache. He has big round eyes. He has big pointed nose. He has wavy short hair. And also he is very broad minded. He is really hard working. He goes to work every day. He just rest to work if he feels very tired. He goes to work start 05.00 a.m. until midnight. He works as a driver. He loves his family very much. He very likes drink coffee. My hero also loves his pets. If he doesn’t work, he always jokes with my family and other people. Usually if we gather he makes a joke that make me laugh together. It’s very funny. He is very friendly person. He is never angry with me. I love him very much.

6 komentar:

  1. punctuation..
    He has wavy short hair. And also he is very broad minded. -> He has wavy short hair and also he is very broad minded

    BalasHapus
  2. He has big round eyes. He has big pointed nose. He has wavy short hair -> He has big round eyes, big pointed nose, and wavy short hair.

    BalasHapus
  3. thanks for your comment guys. .

    BalasHapus
  4. I will tell you about my hero in my life.= i want to describe about my hero in my life

    BalasHapus